Just like children jokelly pour sand on their head
like bees fly into webs in their search for food
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im touch by every word in this poem i love this poem dearly very beautiful
Good imagery. Key of love. I wish we all see love as a key, so that we make and handle it carefully.
It's interesting and pretty easy to read, which is nice. I also like that it's not overly long.
so religious..i like your attitude and point of view about life...very nice self expression..
Nice....very nice...an emotional too...kudos