Sunday, October 26, 2008

Kept Without Sleep. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rolling mists persistently
Invade my dim sight.
Wandering attention benumbs
Brain's activity, blinded by light.
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Fay Slimm
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Laurie Hill 03 April 2009

Many take sleep, for granted. Many wish sleep, be granted. You capture it so very well 10

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Colin Jeffery 01 November 2008

Such a good poem on so many levels

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David Threadgold 26 October 2008

Hi Fay. To be kept without sleep. so well descrbed and penned so well. Regards Dave T

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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