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Exceptional work here, Rehan...Woeful grief, on bristling display...and each line movement...tight, crisp...and smooooooooothe! F j R 2009

superb rehan is ths really u? ? so sad nd deep good yara wit lv n care frm ur swtest fnd sumi :)

hmmmm.......sad sad very sad.. sleeping on the couch rehan, it seems voluntarily? => why so serious?

quite dark here Rehan...I love the second stanza...life heralds death in an unending cycle....nice one