Sunday, June 21, 2015

Kept Alone And Secretly Comments

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Circular ladders spiraling to heaven, taking the
scenic route, entering gardens filled with blue
roses and yellow daffodils.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 24 June 2015

You create an alluring picture of the INTERIOR UNIVERSE - it is place of beauties which can certainly enhance the quality of life, but at the end of the poem it seems like those beauties are going into a witness protection program and won't be accessible. You don't explain the threat to them but any form of original energy, psychic or physical, may need protection and your speaker is providing it. Alas, that our world cannot become the open arena of such beauties.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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