Kelp Caress Comments

This is a deep one. One thinks of the sea - and the sea of subconsciousness - and then the sensual ending makes you certain it's the sea. But, then you think, well, we often find something surprising - or disturbing - when we dive into our dreams, memories, reflections, going beneath the surface. The surface seems attractive, too, in this one. Anyway, it's such a beautiful poem. I love your spare - and evocative imagery. Please, post more for us! Lovexx Will