Friday, April 10, 2015

Keepsakes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fond memories of loved ones gone
Moms voice was such a sweet tone
A hardy shake from dads strong hand
Showing us that he was our great man
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Patricia Grantham
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Valsa George 22 July 2015

Watching the beauty of flowers as they bloom Just like the colors of yarn weaved on a loom Beautiful lines....! Yes, if we look around, there is so much beauty strewn around! Sitting with family in an open porch and looking out, enjoying the myriad scenes and sights is indeed a great experience never to be missed! Enjoyed!

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Hannington Mumo 17 April 2015

This is a versifier who qualifies to be called a poet. I like your natural rhyme scheme. I almost feel like we should co-author poems, stanza after stanza. Thanks! I VOTE 10/10!

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 16 April 2015

Hello poet Patricia. I enjoyed your poem. Your words painted a very clear picture and took me back to my own memories. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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