Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Keeps Affecting Me Deep! Comments

Rating: 5.0

When his friends are roaming in shoping malls,
he is in the library, sinking in Shakespeare,
and not noticing me in the opposite seat.
When his friends crave for a glance from me,
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Rajendran Muthiah
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Doris Cornago 05 August 2017

Maybe, this is the same reason I am always preoccupied with this young man - the contrast of indifference which sets him apart the rest.

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Doris Cornago 05 August 2017

This is a dangerous preoccupation. Keep guard on your heart. :)

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Bharati Nayak 31 October 2016

The early signs of falling in love- - - so beautifully told! The poem enthralled me from beginning to end.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

My modest heart! ! Seeing the ways of mankind around me. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

Nice nice, very nice, the flow of the poem is excellent and the theme has been dealt modestly , I like the poem and I am giving 100/100.

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Raj Arumugam 29 February 2012

deeply moving - and well you've portrayed the character of both people in this story poem...

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Dave Walker 28 February 2012

A really great poem, really like it, a great write.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 February 2012

Nice story and well written, rajendran muthiah

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Rajendran Muthiah

Rajendran Muthiah

Madurai District, Tamil Nadu, India.
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