Keeping Up With The Times Comments

An insightful piece of poetry in verse with rhythmic splendour.

It is a satirical poem. Consequently, my questions are rhetorical. Thanks Sandra, but if I was to add ' these lousy' it would be too many syllables, but I appreciate your suggestion. I'm pleased that you get the implicit humour in the poem Shaun...the idea that a middle class white person like myself would embrace rap and grime is obviously preposterous! It's more of a dig at myself as I actually like some forms of this modern music: powerful and vital new art forms in the right hands,

Fashion is only now. Style is timeless. The times can change but everything goes full circle. Nice satire metaphor on poetry and music and a full score Dominic and to be delivered by a real gansta canary yellow bad a s s muscle bling bling car. Respect.

Nice. Dont mind what people say. Just write write write until its right.

Since your asking for advice, to this very good social poem I would only add 2 words to its last line: " O it's so hard to keep up with these lousy times"