Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Keeping Pace With Time Comments

Rating: 4.7

Measures of time need
Man's periodic intervention.

When sand's all down
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Kingsley Egbukole 07 October 2023

Time keeps going and never waits for anyone. We just have to move with the time. Beautiful poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 October 2023

Wonderful! Beautfully expressed....Man's alert always keeps on marching, marching...Top score for this wonderful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 May 2018

Time's perennial river Keeps on flowing, flowing Time's planet earth Keeps on turning, turning......Enduring attention... alert.... so many words that attracted me in this poem. you are presenting a great truth .. dear poet. thank you for reminding us of it...... time is running out for all of us. tony

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Valsa George 27 March 2015

Man's periodic intervention is needed in everything! Otherwise Time, like a river will flow without a designed course! We have to march with time but directing its course! Great write!

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Ken E Hall 26 March 2015

yes we are all with the march of time keeping pace I hope...loved the look at all the time pieces we have and enjoyed the time journey within your poem...regards

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Tushar Ray 24 March 2015

Beautiful poetic version of the causal relation with time. All relative things are time-bound in this universe. Very nice.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 24 March 2015

Great observations, Sir. Not many write on such a profound theme like time.

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Kelly Kurt 24 March 2015

Very well put. I enjoyed this. Thank you

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