Thursday, June 2, 2005

Keeping My Hands To Myself Comments

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A question i put to you all,
Why can i not keep my hands to myself?

A quick feel of him, a little touch of her,
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Lily Espinosa
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Raynette Eitel 02 June 2005

Eima, it helps the cause of poetry if you spell words correctly and use good punctuation. 'ment' is 'meant.' If the offers there, should be 'If the offer's there. Your last stanza is good...but do put a capital 'I'. Raynette

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