Eima, it helps the cause of poetry if you spell words correctly and use good punctuation. 'ment' is 'meant.' If the offers there, should be 'If the offer's there. Your last stanza is good...but do put a capital 'I'.
Raynette
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Eima, it helps the cause of poetry if you spell words correctly and use good punctuation. 'ment' is 'meant.' If the offers there, should be 'If the offer's there. Your last stanza is good...but do put a capital 'I'. Raynette