Keeper Comments

How you have captured his pain at his separation from his little guys, and your pain at not being able to help him, feeling somewhat shut out of his life with them, and wanting to share. Scarlett

Said with the kindest words, he must be proud to have someone like you in his life. Love Duncan

Very well captured. avr

I agree with Sylvia, about this one.

Gypsy this poem is so touching, There should be a law made that every parent should have the right to see there children, great poem and you really got the message across cheers sylvie

something too many of us can relate to, good imagery in this one Andrew

Very perceptive and sincere. Good poem

This is such a heartfelt poem Gypsy.. Being a father from a distance can be quite difficult.. thank you for sharing this HBH