Friday, May 10, 2013

Keeper Of Secrets Comments

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Here you want my black little book have it.
Secrets revealed.
No more, no longer mine.
No more, no longer time.
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Unwritten Soul 11 May 2013

If we compare others with self, we may see we are less in some cases but dont we found what we good at than others too? well mostly we see the thing that we only nothing than others and weaker, so if we feel this let we try to be thankful in each we have now...because we never feel how great we are now till we lose all we had. If book was black and surely the secret was written by black pen, as if your secret is white i am sure your book is white...it exist but hidden..you will see everybody hold a secret in their heart, they write them with the feeling that invisible from other eyes...if only their eyes feel the same colors of the ink, they will know.. secret sometimes is better be secret, but sometimes remain untold but littlest being revealed and it's good to do...and keeper of secret is like the guard of the castle door... we keep it because we only allow good things to us and you know, you know why secret does matter to unwritten your soul from other eyes because once it told it never be secret anymore, and secret like i told better untold or if you cant dont hold..your poem is provoking my thought Ace_Soul

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Poetheart Morgan 10 May 2013

The black book should go back to your hands and if you can, put the poem inside! Again your poetry makes me think. Very powerful both the book and the poem.

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