Monday, August 1, 2005

Keeper Of My Heart Comments

Rating: 3.7

Keeper of my heart
Mover of my soul
Protector of my dreams
The half that makes me whole.
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Terry Biscamp
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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2017

The spiritual essence of romantic love (Eros) is aptly captured in the poem. Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Terry.

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Della Senter 09 June 2016

I made a comment on another poem and called this Gatekeeper of my heart! This is the one I was referring to. Apologies to the poet!

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Terry Craddock 22 September 2015

Beautiful sentiments and the secret desire of so many, I pray this love endues vibrant, against all tests of time.

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Bernard Snyder 22 September 2015

Nice expression of love. Great stuff!

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Rajnish Manga 22 September 2015

A very sweet and melodious romantic poem which dazzles in its earthy expression of love between the lovers: Protector of my dreams The half that makes me whole.

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Kim Barney 22 September 2015

Well written. Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day.

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Paul Reed 22 September 2015

Very well structured, simple and meaningful

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 September 2015

Fantastic and 100 % sincere expression of true love for a lover expressed by his beloved. Thanks for sharing. It was a delight to read it.

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Kinyua Karanja 22 September 2015

This poem is so cool, the tone is exceptional and there is sincerity in the voice of persona. This stanza stole my heart for sure: The name that's on my lips The desire that burns in me The reason that I love again The missing part of me Nice work keep it there.

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Ramesh Rai 26 October 2014

I love loving you There will never be another Always the keeper of my heart My one and only lover. Beautiful. Love your soulful write.

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