Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Keep Your Hands Off My Stack, Jack Comments

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Where have all the dreamers gone
The lilac petals’ winters fall
Piece by piece the roads pull back
To substitute an arrival lack
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Charlotte Ambrosia
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Victor Gama Sabbithi 15 June 2009

this is depressing, but good wording. when run down, don't worry, look at that emrald city and feel it in you. The wolf will hunger to look away from death. The road falls if you let it.

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Amber Roser 04 June 2009

love it! ! you are a really talented poet, look forward to reading more.

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