Wednesday, September 26, 2018

Keep Your Eyes On Me Comments

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I walked the ramp
in my red stunning dress
half uncovering my curves
all lights were focussed on me
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me poet yeps poet
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

poor actor being gazed engorged, enraptured only by judges so far the thought all were admiring me was really not so now one could see but an intent an innate desire only......... touching inscription. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2018

Yes, I accept it, beauty is not only in the pink petals of a rose. A rose plant with green leaves and delicate branches branches gives a better image of a rose.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2018

and thanks red and green r essence of BEING

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