Keep Your Eyes On Me Poem by me poet yeps poet

Keep Your Eyes On Me

Rating: 5.0


I walked the ramp
in my red stunning dress
half uncovering my curves
all lights were focussed on me
the distant guys could see
all were staring at me

I became the cynosure of all visuals
this I alone did believe

suddenly a large crowd in the distance
laughed and clapped
as I tripped
it slapped up my mind
they were not gazing at me
but on the bar lady
who fell drunk on someone's laps
then only one could realise
all don't stare at ye

a poor actor being gazed
engorged, enraptured
only by judges
so far the thought
all were admiring me
was really not so
now one could see
but an intent
an innate desire only

that was me
poetess
dancing with glee

Wednesday, September 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: center,cynicism ,dancing,eyes,imagery,poetess,attraction
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
NotesWhen one is the centre of the stage they hope everyone will stare at them only They don't realise others have come for a variety of purpose Drink dance and winewhy look at a nonentity can you ever accept it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

poor actor being gazed engorged, enraptured only by judges so far the thought all were admiring me was really not so now one could see but an intent an innate desire only......... touching inscription. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2018

Yes, I accept it, beauty is not only in the pink petals of a rose. A rose plant with green leaves and delicate branches branches gives a better image of a rose.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2018

and thanks red and green r essence of BEING

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