Keep Your Aim In Sight Comments
He stood there with the force,
Of heavens strength around
Face of child, with true light,
Upon this rocky ground
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A lot of vivid images and involvment of sensory perceptions. The contrasts are also very effective. Another fine piece of work.
A wonderful poem Duncan, it has a lovely flow and great subject matter. '10' Andrew
An astoundingly well crafted work, Duncan! You're attention to detail and your vivid imagery are beautiful and provocative. ~Ray
Miraculously written and very deep too. You have a really gone into what a Saint would do. WONDERFUL POEM! ! !
Thank you duncan..such a wonderful piece of poetry....it really touched my heart...jus when i need it the most...u were so very right..thank you for your true pearls of wisdom......will hold them close to my heart..love leilaXXXX
Duncan, a great narrative poem. I really liked this. Kept me reading all the way through. Great subject matter that is dear to my heart. Thanks for pointing me in its direction and letting me share it. David
This poem has such awesome imagery, Duncan... very uplifting, hopeful, powerful... great storytelling from the best! ! Thank you for the opportunity to read it, loved it! Lee
visually heroic and packed with energized imagery, Duncan. awesome tale of righteous victory. excellent work. -Tailor
Very brilliant and I feel as if i were there. A great poem. You are truly gifted. Warmest Regards, Donna
The imagry of this most dramatic piece was amazing. A wonderful epic, great story with such imagination, guided by the divine hand. You uplift the today poet and give them inspiration to continue on in the hope that one day, they will have a talent such as yours. I truly enjoyed this joyous write. You definitely were feeling this poem. Thankyou Duncan---Melvina---
Grand piece of work here, Duncan. I love anything about knights and the fight for truth and freedom. Your brilliant use of imagery sets the stage for this wonderful tale, and it is pure magic! I certainly enjoyed the read - thank you for this lovely poem! Linda
wow.. this poem is very deep, , , and to realize its true essence, it needs to be read more than once.. in many cases more than twice, because many of the lines have a deeper meaning. i remember the part where it said keep your aim in sight.. and i believe the next part was sever the dark of light..or something similar to that.. for different people that could mean a variety of diff. things but 4 me it stood 4 standing strong, and keeping your ambitions, goals, & your wants at hand and focusing on them in the darkest of hours.. lots of love Debbie: -) p.s. keep writing never ever stop expressing the way of the world in your view
Duncan I just felt so chocked when I read this poem because I fought with knights of old and met damsels in distress, so many images here I just love your work. cheers Sylviex
Your words move me. Move me in a way I have no way to describe. You have a true gift. Thank you. Amy
What a clever writer you are...what a wonderful gift you hold. Well done! Hugs, dee
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7/18/2025 1:45:27 AM # 1.0.0
Well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful piece of poetry.