I don't know whether
The path I am treading will
Take me to my goal
Or I will be lost in some
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Absolutely right is your concluding last line, times ago I wrote a poem titled KEEP MOVING that was about my belief, but you create here the true finest truth in life, heart touching poem deserves 5 Stars TOP Score
I'll take the roses WITHOUT thorns, please. Each of us may 'deserve' some of each, praise and blame. : ) bri