Sunday, January 10, 2016

Keep Upright - A Motivational Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

A traveler while wandering across
Saw a man sitting on the path
Looking dejected and deep in thoughts
Saw when traveler approaching he asked
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

Life is waiting for you to come and restart! Nice piece of work.

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Valsa George 14 January 2016

Very inspirational write! Though much is lost, still it is not time to lose all hopes. From the debris of shattered dreams, a new life can resurrect! So never leave hope........! Cling on to life....... Who knows if some one will come as a saviour at a point when all hopes are lost! It is sad to read the stories of increasing suicide when beset with the problems of life!

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Nosheen Irfan 11 January 2016

What a great write! Enriching, enlightening poem. It really gripped me. Thanks for sharing.10 undoubtedly.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2016

Looking dejected and deep in thoughts, a traveler wanders in cross mind. Never loosing faith in life and keeping self upright is definitely nice in this sharing.10

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Rajnish Manga 10 January 2016

Though, the poem progresses on a serious note in poignant mood but turns optimistic towards the end with a profound message. Excellent work. Thank you, Asim ji. Opportunities are plenty for those who fight Never lose your faith in life, just keep yourself upright.

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M. Asim Nehal

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