A traveler while wandering across
Saw a man sitting on the path
Looking dejected and deep in thoughts
Saw when traveler approaching he asked
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Very inspirational write! Though much is lost, still it is not time to lose all hopes. From the debris of shattered dreams, a new life can resurrect! So never leave hope........! Cling on to life....... Who knows if some one will come as a saviour at a point when all hopes are lost! It is sad to read the stories of increasing suicide when beset with the problems of life!
What a great write! Enriching, enlightening poem. It really gripped me. Thanks for sharing.10 undoubtedly.
Looking dejected and deep in thoughts, a traveler wanders in cross mind. Never loosing faith in life and keeping self upright is definitely nice in this sharing.10
Though, the poem progresses on a serious note in poignant mood but turns optimistic towards the end with a profound message. Excellent work. Thank you, Asim ji. Opportunities are plenty for those who fight Never lose your faith in life, just keep yourself upright.
Life is waiting for you to come and restart! Nice piece of work.