Keep Up The Smile :) Comments

A simple smile works wonders really.

very well written and it is a contagious smile......10

Very good this is deffinettly written on your own excellent.

Spot on young fella.

Absolutely fantastic write. Good choice of subject and words, excellent rhyme. Top class Pranav.............10+++

A happy little ditty keeping us with smiles keep up the good work keep writing and reading lots of poems regards ps problem is miss spelt

your smile is definitely contagious. A 10+ from me.

and a smile is a tool for a young poet like you.voted10 surya

A very good poem and a positive message. I love it. Keep it up. CP

Lovely poem Pranav, smile awhile!

a really nice poem....can make any1 smile even d gr8est bully in the wrld!

'Say cheese, and let the smile freeze' lol. Really nice and cute poem.I smiled SO big while reading this! Keep up the good work.

I liked this very, very much. It has wonderful rhyme and message delivered in a concise and clear manner. Just a delightful tone as well. This is the way to write a poem. Nothing but praise for the writer. Wonderful! GW62

You´re so right one smile can be like a ray of sunllight enlightening the whole world. Dreamgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

A good poem Pranav. Smile costs you nothing, yet it reduces your tension & makes friends! -Raj Nandy

very good advice.....really nice poem& good ryhem keep it up.

I agree..'keep smiling' should be everyone; s motto...teaching poem

A smile for you all the way.................... You've got a great future awaiting in this wonderful journey of self expression.

Pranav, It is important that you keep writing your poems and bouncing them off of your fellow poets. Nice little poem. I see great things for you as a poet. Just for the heck of it try writing another poem about smiling and use free verse so you don't have to worry so much about rhyming. see how it comes out. Do not make it very long. keep up the good work.

Keep up the smile................I am smiling..................: -) ...............Good Write.........