Thursday, September 3, 2015

Keep Up The Fighting Spirit Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the grip of prejudice
Life offers them no respite
they keep on struggle despite
only the strong people survive
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2016

Hope is the only light on this journey! Nice work.

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Rajnish Manga 19 November 2015

Life is a challenging journey which can be successfully completed through Hope... 'Courage, determination, struggle and fight' against prejudice and forces of darkness. Thanks for sharing this great poem which calls for a constant, positive, forceful action to attain one's goals as well as personal and social sublimation.

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Sanjukta Nag 04 September 2015

Absolutely... Life’s journey is nothing but mixture of Courage, determination, struggle and fight. a very realistic poem. and the structure of the poem is also admirable

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