Keep Trying...... Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Keep Trying......

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I don't want to quit until the last call
to keep trying, trying, trying...WITH DETERMINATION.

I listen to great speeches and elders experiences
to act and plan with DEDICATION.

I always think the past, present and future
to reset, reassess and relive in APPRECIATION.

I earn as much as possible to live righteously
but generously give to live and let live... in DEVOTION.

I wait for the right moment, giving space even for time
to lead a life with out any CONTAMINATION.

I ought to forgive the misdeeds and ill thoughts of wrong doers
to make them less fortunate because of their CORRUPTION.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
don't give up, keep trying, to live righteously
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 August 2016

Until the last call! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 12 August 2016

verily, our life is a trial, where we have to try and try till the last breath of our life.......10

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thanks al ot dear poet, thanks again for your generosity, welcome

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