Keep This Desire On.... Comments

Yes, this desire is the drive to living! If there is no desire, life will be so bland! But too much desire, as Buddha says is the root cause of all our suffering! A well thought out poem!

Th flow of your poem is so smooth, i know your secret...you kep the desire on..... beautiful write Asim Nehal. :)

The desire of the truth and the desire of love. Thanks for sharing.

This desire is what life is all about. We must not fail to keep it burning as you said here. Thank you for this Life-affirming, positive poem Asim.

Wow. That's such a lovely read. So simple, yet so powerful. It has a wonderful impact on the reader. Full marks.

KHvaahishon ke peD se girte hue patte na chun zindagii ke sehn me.n ummiid kaa paudaa lagaa Iqbal Naved ne kya khoob kaha...lekin khwahisein to khwahishein hai seene main palti hai...In khwahshon se kaun apna daman bacha paaya hai... khoobsurat aur dichasp nazm. Khwahishon ko zinda rakho aur umeed ke paani se seenchte raho InshAllaah khwahishein poori zaroor hongi. Lajawab nazm..dilli daad.

There are times when a desire is unachievable, even harmful, and has to be suppressed.

I am keeping this desire ON...............10