Friday, May 22, 2015

Keep The Red Ball And Throw The White Ball Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dear lovely children!
Do you want to play ball?
If it is so then
Come to me with friends and call.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

We should always carry positive qualities and do good to others. A nice poem that has nice thought you have shared.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2016

picture of Nishu Mathur xOh this is wonderful. What a beautiful relevant message. Great metaphor too. 23 May 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Keith Labonte xGreat work! Really enjoyed the metaphors and the flow to them. 24 May 2015 by Keith Labonte | Reply picture of DEEP DARK SOUL xThis is fascinating, clever 24 May 2015 by DEEP DARK SOUL | Reply

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Savita Tyagi 23 May 2015

Simply adorable! Children must have loved playing ball with you. Thanks for sharing.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 23 May 2015

A lovely poem for the children and all. Truly, goodness attracts goodness and vice versa but greatness is in returning bad with good.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 May 2015

Dear children do you know What did Jesus Christ say? 'Do to other as you wish them to Do to you' it is sunshine make hay. A beautiful poem for the kids with a great heavenly message in it.............................10

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Kelly Kurt 22 May 2015

A wonderful lesson in a delightful poem. I hope many read this and follow its advice. Peace

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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