Wednesday, January 3, 2018

Keep Smiling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Living in your heart
and peeping out through your eyes
not only dining with you
I am breathing with you.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 04 March 2018

A great poem on mother and child.

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Indira Renganathan 05 January 2018

The baby's feeling and the mother's smile.....awesome and admirable poem

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Valsa George 05 January 2018

Here the love between a mother and child is glorified! That's the most sacred of all relations! A lovely write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2018

Memories and love live in heart. A child and mother both are associated with deep connection. There is crying and there is smiling. Emotion drops beauty of hope and we feel light of affection near true heart. Mother's smile gives joy and new light in child's heart. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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Khalid Saifullah 03 January 2018

What a great poem is it...................................................!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 January 2018

Akhtar, such a lovely write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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M Asim Nehal 03 January 2018

Heart touching poem, Janab, well written.

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Rini Shibu 03 January 2018

A great tribute to a mother.. Wonderful lines Living in your heart And peeping through your eyes..10

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