Friday, January 29, 2021

Keep Silence Please Comments

Rating: 5.0

They have become a silent story,
A story written on stones and bricks,
While each brick narrates a different story
As you touch them, run your hand,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 January 2021

The stories of yesteryears create their history that affects the lives of humanity.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 January 2021

A poem of great depth. Very perceptive and well expressed.

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Susan Williams 31 January 2021

5 stars on this! ! ! favoriting it as well

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Susan Williams 31 January 2021

They have become a silent story, A story written on stones and bricks, ===a beautifully somber beginning to this poem

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me poet yeps poet 30 January 2021

trying to get a hang over here SILENTLY NEW PGMME OF PH CONFUSING NO

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me poet yeps poet 30 January 2021

oakaya moiya siolunced

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Anjandev Roy 30 January 2021

Such a brilliant piece....

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 January 2021

The perennial beauty will be revealed with gradual sensation and perception in silence only. Natural perception gives us wonder of silence. Bricks are not built as ruins rather these are ruined by attack. Woman carries natural motherhood and she should be respected.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 January 2021

Story written on stones and bricks give us wonderful information and silently whispers to wisely and carefully listen to the history. If you touch the hands on bricks they will convey about betrayal, envy and war. However we need peace. We get it in silence.

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Suzon Albert 29 January 2021

How well you compared the life of past with present.

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Gracy Fernando 29 January 2021

I love to visit monuments, yes they have several secrets to tell who knows some day they may reveal.

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Mamta S 29 January 2021

The ruins have many things to reveal only require patience to understand its agony. Brilliant 👏

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Kostas Lagos 29 January 2021

Silence can be so loud! Excellent poem!

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Varsha M 29 January 2021

Yes sir silence have many stories to speak. But only few even think thst it needs to be heard. Well written. Great admirations.

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M. Asim Nehal

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