keep on smiling even by the shadows
trudging when rigged off by the ridges low
yet the silence coos in the vale of sorrows
storm may come with the rain oozing of tears
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Cpmputer problems. Cannot find Maiden Kiss. Above poem I find very well written, greatly optimistic and comforting. Thanks a million. John
nicely written.so hopeful.thanks for sharing.and thanks for making me smile.i'm sure everyone who will read this poem will do, too.10/10
dreams come true by the moment splashing......... this is a beautiful line. i hope it comes true for all to bring back smile that time and pain has snatched from people's face. thanks for sharing it with all.
You've brought a bright smile to every reader's face with each line of this great piece... :) :) :)
Beautiful, Dr.Kar. Only the rare soul can smile in spite of all the difficulties. Keep on sharing your special gift with the world. Warmest regards, Sandra.
Yes a smile simplicity in itself and yet a free gift of life makes the world seem a closer place 10 Chris
Keep on smiling even by the shadows Trudging when rigged off by the ridges lows yet the silence coos in the vale of sorrows storm may come with rain oozing of tears- - - - - - - - Awesome beauty in words, theme and expression.