Sunday, June 21, 2009

Keep On Raising Rate Of Beats Comments

Rating: 2.9

Keep on raising rate of beats

then the raising keep slow,
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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 March 2010

Sure poets are true healer …… twee… buoy … wonderful enjoyed Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+

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~ Jon London ~ 26 July 2009

Words that echoes the pattern of life back into the heart...nicely done Tamara

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Saadat Tahir 16 July 2009

Where shepherds once were hous'd in homely sheds, Now tow'rs within the clouds advance their heads. writing credit...where due! The Aeneid, by Virgil

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Afzal Shauq 12 July 2009

I again and again say that tamara dear is a good poetess with realistic approach and her pasion is to promote quality and sense of competetion...appreciate her.10/10

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rago rago 06 July 2009

let it beat at rhythm and the rhythm keep on raising............

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Rakesh Bedi 02 July 2009

.... broken hearts I treat; nice! Both the activities belong to love n only love!

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 June 2009

hello ma'am.. your words are great nourishment for the, sore, wounded, shattered hearts indeed.. thanks for providing us with such pieces..10++ with lots of love shan

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

Amazing piece

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Afzal Shauq 25 June 2009

Keep on raising rate of beats then the raising keep slow, broken hearts i treat. what a sweet haiko written in japanese way... very inspiring and heart felt..I think this is one of your best poems and I am inspired of its idea and the way you done perfectly..I suggest for you to continue the same way..and your work and ideas will be unbeatable..and readers will like..as I liked it very much..well done friend for sweet poem..10+++++++++++++++++

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The Dreamer 24 June 2009

broken hearts i treat. I like these words always better to treat than create - Thank you

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sure you are able to treat any heart... paasionated writing iam waiting to read your interresting poem andmeaningful words+++++++++++++ with Shakespeare sweet

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short but strong.... good work Amraat

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Abby Mackaway 22 June 2009

I can wait to read the longer version of this poem! I like to read poems that treat broken hearts. let me know when it's done! With respect, Abby

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thanks friends..this was a love poem, what happen between two lover.the heart beats increase, then some how with dome mean it again decrease..it is a part of long poem will post it later..thanks

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Carl Harris 21 June 2009

Though brief and quite terse, Tamara, this interesting short poem gets it's message across to the reader very well. To paraphrase the great Shakespeare, 'Brevity is the soul of wit, ' even in brief poetry! Carl.

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Ejaz Khan 21 June 2009

I feel the heat.... growing and out of turmoil comes harmony in the end. Short but meaningful, let everything out!

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James Mclain 21 June 2009

Two bold humming birds one flower) s(...iip

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all in the rat race...when you push yourself harder heart beats more...ignore and explore poetry

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