Keep On Raising Rate Of Beats Comments

Sure poets are true healer …… twee… buoy … wonderful enjoyed Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+

Words that echoes the pattern of life back into the heart...nicely done Tamara

Where shepherds once were hous'd in homely sheds, Now tow'rs within the clouds advance their heads. writing credit...where due! The Aeneid, by Virgil

I again and again say that tamara dear is a good poetess with realistic approach and her pasion is to promote quality and sense of competetion...appreciate her.10/10

let it beat at rhythm and the rhythm keep on raising............

.... broken hearts I treat; nice! Both the activities belong to love n only love!

hello ma'am.. your words are great nourishment for the, sore, wounded, shattered hearts indeed.. thanks for providing us with such pieces..10++ with lots of love shan

Amazing piece

Keep on raising rate of beats then the raising keep slow, broken hearts i treat. what a sweet haiko written in japanese way... very inspiring and heart felt..I think this is one of your best poems and I am inspired of its idea and the way you done perfectly..I suggest for you to continue the same way..and your work and ideas will be unbeatable..and readers will like..as I liked it very much..well done friend for sweet poem..10+++++++++++++++++

broken hearts i treat. I like these words always better to treat than create - Thank you

sure you are able to treat any heart... paasionated writing iam waiting to read your interresting poem andmeaningful words+++++++++++++ with Shakespeare sweet

short but strong.... good work Amraat

I can wait to read the longer version of this poem! I like to read poems that treat broken hearts. let me know when it's done! With respect, Abby

thanks friends..this was a love poem, what happen between two lover.the heart beats increase, then some how with dome mean it again decrease..it is a part of long poem will post it later..thanks

Though brief and quite terse, Tamara, this interesting short poem gets it's message across to the reader very well. To paraphrase the great Shakespeare, 'Brevity is the soul of wit, ' even in brief poetry! Carl.

I feel the heat.... growing and out of turmoil comes harmony in the end. Short but meaningful, let everything out!

Two bold humming birds one flower) s(...iip

all in the rat race...when you push yourself harder heart beats more...ignore and explore poetry