Keep Moving Toward A Perfect Union Comments

A delightful poem about the twins. They may be harsh to each other now but twins can never stay mad long. May God bless them both. Your friend Lynn

i guess it was like that. being a twin myself i always had someone to play with and i never had to finish what i was saying because he already knew. as for their differences only they know root of the conflict. nicely written

Beautiful subject to write. Unseparated embryo we all in the womb of universe but we quarrel and dominate and kill each other. Asking not Why? So many theories are peeping through this poem, better try to praise you simply. Its a great work and poet herself also know it at the time after reediting the writing. Simply beautiful is my last utterance for this one. Write more...more.... Regards, 10+ pranab