Keep Moving Ahead Comments
Good beginning is half work done
Past is past and already gone
See that another leaf is opened
Golden words are silently penned
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Stefania Bulas · Friends with Ashraful Musaddeq Takes two to make sparks... 46 minutes ago · Unlike · 1
Bu Magda and Sheikh Talha like this. Bu Magda Ya keep moving.... about an hour ago via mobile · Unlike · 1
Melissa Norton12 minutes ago well written, I like this, Comment +1 Clever message and Word Choice
Mitch Gundrum12 minutes ago I really enjoyed the differing forms and structures this took on, as well as the attention to word choice and rhyme. well done!
Half hearted attempt to inspire the dead Brian LeeLess than a minute ago I'm about the least qualified to critique another I'm not sure my own words would be considered poetry it's just a way to release some of my pain before it consumes me. Seemed to be a positive message maybe a little rushed Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago give vent to your feeling dear... it is poetry and poetical language.. may be well understood 0 I liked it, just missing something.
Matt G11 minutes ago It works, but it felt like a special message was never delivered.
Good beginning is half work done Past is past and already gone
Good beginning is half work done Past is past and already gone
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7/28/2025 8:38:15 AM # 1.0.0
This is a really good message. Keep moving and don't stop because you will lose your place and some other may take it and run. Staying in the same spot can stagnate you just like a pond that has no moving water. Very inspiring.