Monday, May 19, 2014

Keep Me In Your Grace Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sitting in quiet
I surrender to you
O! My lord
My winnings your grace
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Savita Tyagi
COMMENTS
Amitava Sur 30 June 2014

Very nice Savita, enjoyed this innocent prayer made. With your light shining This rotten stinking trash bin Becomes a sparkling treasure chest ... that light is hidden in your name only. Ha Ha.

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Ramesh Rai 22 June 2014

Without His grace we can not imagine even. I invite you to read my poem The Hymn of Mercy.

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Neela Nath Das 22 June 2014

So gentle expression.It reminds me, the lines from Tagore's song- - - - Let me bow down my head before Your feet...A serene poem.

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Chuy Amante 01 June 2014

Lord Krishna? There are many Lord's out there, just wondering to whom is your prayer? I liked it very much!

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Brian Jani 29 May 2014

Nice one Savita I like it.

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Valsa George 24 May 2014

A humble and earnest supplication to the Almighty.... Yes, we all need God's grace to become sparkling treasure chests! Loved reading this, Savita!

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A prayer pleading for grace. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 May 2014

My winnings your grace My losses your admonition Lovely lines of a beautiful poem.

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Fatima Nusairat 20 May 2014

Love it thanks for sharing Savita

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