Saturday, January 5, 2013

Keep Living 8 (Last Part) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Searched he, in rooms and garden sweet
Restlessly he ran, the queen, he had to meet
To every place he went, found no sign
Wished and prayed she might be all fine
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Jahan Zeb
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Stevie Taite 10 January 2013

That was epic! A romantic series of poems with a happy ending! Just so sweet! X x I can tell you enjoyed composing it! X x and we enjoyed reading it!

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Hazel Durham 06 January 2013

A truly romantic and beautiful ending written from the heart! Your ''Keep Living'' poems are full of optimism, love and true grit in a sometimes hostile world!

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Payal Parande 05 January 2013

oh! how amazing...i am speechless sir...beautiful story from start to end....you get 101 out of 100 bravo.................

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Unwritten Soul 05 January 2013

This poem had differently among all Keep living poems...well this is the last part, after this we still must keep living right hahahahaha....the poem written with very well like always but tell me a deep about the real story behind it...to my mail_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 05 January 2013

Followed footmarks. I like it. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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