Wednesday, January 2, 2013

Keep Living 7 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sunlight dimmed, no sign of the king yet
The dark drew, in chest of the queen, a cut
Doubts in her heart, lost hope of his return
The warmth of his arms, but she had to earn
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Jahan Zeb
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Stevie Taite 10 January 2013

I am imagining the look on their tired faces! Reunited at last! X x yay

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Valsa George 03 January 2013

Now he will gallantly walk up to his princess and after an emotional tight embrace with tears of joy running down from each others eyes, rescue her from the island, go back and live together happy evermore, never to part again! ! Though sounds like a fairy tale, the way you have stringed together the incidents and presented them are remarkable and enjoyable! ! A great narrative! !

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Sallam Yassin 02 January 2013

is the king adam in a great way u told the story of mankind her adam rose like the sun from east/top one Jahan god bless u

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Sallam Yassin 02 January 2013

is the king adam in a great way u told the story of mankind her adam rose like the sun from east/top one Jahan god bless u

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Hazel Durham 02 January 2013

True love never runs smooth, with so many obstacles put in their path! Great story! !

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