We were different yet not
Two souls sailing in the same boat
By the looks of your pale face
Surely none waiting you on the shore
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It is only the beginning! ! ! ! Has much more for comes! ! ! ! You are a Pandora Box, Poet! ! !
wonderful and so great ur creative soul this voyage of two soul
What a wonderful voyage of renewed hope and love for two broken hearts, so brilliantly written!
That was very creative...like unwritten soul i too was lost in the poem
I am so lost in these lines, so beautiful poem you made Jahan, or Jehan haha..sweetly made! ! it was an inspirational write to me, and it kinda remind an artwork i shared you called a soul of two trees...now i have to check next chapter, Keep Living part 2, what a homework you gave me hahaha_Soul
ahh....i think you should leave your job of teaching and write some meaningfulness romantic songs for us..cause at least then we'll know the real meaning of love......cause whenever i read your piece i feel like i am reading some ancient write which never can be wrong beautiful poem sir, i am giving a standing ovation....bravo love payal
It is only the beginning! ! ! ! Has much more for comes! ! ! ! You are a Pandora Box, Poet! ! !