Came out the two later, deep at night
Breeze blew, stars shone, moon so bright
Wrapped in one blanket were two souls
No music, no dance, no jobs, no dolls
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This third edition sound mature and a new way from the past episode of Keep Living poem...very nice poem but i really amazed how the story was evolved into new perspective from 1,2 to 3.. A teacher knows what to teach..surely know how to make a thing become interesting to listen_Soul
hmm...whenever i read a book or see a movie i always hate tragic part i always desire to just skip it but everything have some good things and bad things......as always bravo write sir though i do hope the ending is happy i don't like sad endings...........
This is a great idea! A series of poems to keep us hooked! X x