Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Keep Living (2) Comments

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The boat moved to an Island of beauty sublime
Green grass tall trees beauteous land
Races on beech, warm sun, hand in hand
Sitting on beach the time the sun sits
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Jahan Zeb
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Stevie Taite 10 January 2013

: -) ooooh what happens next........ X; -)

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Hazel Durham 30 December 2012

You paint in words a romance that dances with grace and charm embracing the reader with it's great warmth! Love it!

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2012

Really amazing, i suggest you get some colors and paper then painted them from your mind..it will be a colorful beautiful painting....i love it but part one got something that i so called my soul type..part two was expanding the base_Soul

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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