You've got to pay attention,
keep a track of your mind;
Don't let them be the victors,
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Brilliant advice! I invite you to read my write, While You're Rising Up, as I sense we are on a similar path of realization. Excellent poem.
Self realization through your shadows, searching for a way out, paying attention to details in your life which may give you the strength to stay in touch with yourself. Very good and sage advice within this poem, a nice staccato beat keeping track of your lines. Very good, Brian! Please keep writing, nice style you have. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn