Sunday, February 8, 2015

Keep In Touch With Yourself Comments

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You've got to pay attention,
keep a track of your mind;

Don't let them be the victors,
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Brian Stafford
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Roseann Shawiak 25 July 2015

Self realization through your shadows, searching for a way out, paying attention to details in your life which may give you the strength to stay in touch with yourself. Very good and sage advice within this poem, a nice staccato beat keeping track of your lines. Very good, Brian! Please keep writing, nice style you have. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Susan Lacovara 16 February 2015

Brilliant advice! I invite you to read my write, While You're Rising Up, as I sense we are on a similar path of realization. Excellent poem.

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