Keep Going Comments

The most beautiful are the last two verses with their contra post of the words night-light.

Never too dark! A beautiful optimistic poem.When I read it, I felt cool air blowing gently!

Like your optimistic enthusiasm and there is a great message in this very short poem of yours. (10)

When darkness is deep and life lies in a heap, we fall in confusion and agony comes in life due to fear. Even under a moonless sky we shall walk in light of tenderness in freedom and courage. This is a very beautiful poem shared here. An interesting sharing is done here...10

If there is light inside, we needn't fear external darkness! We are not to be vanquished by hurdles but should boldly venture to overcome and proceed our journey dauntless! I see here the sparks of an indomitable spirit!

That last line redeems the poem. I wondered how you would resolve the crisis of this poem (because you don't leave us dangling) but what you show us is really wondrous. In the darkness the source of light is within us: we can rescue ourselves! ! And must do so. This is a poem of hope in an age of despair.

with a heart made of light, we should accept every such heart, and there will be no darkness. beautiful poem Nosheen

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. March forward on darkness or in light is courageous step with better hope in life. It is a philosophical poem on life with stunning expression.

But you can't retreat You have burnt your boats Keep walking on, A great poem inspiring to walk along irrespective of the hurdles, nicely penned. A huge 10+++++ Regards. Subhas

Keep going with a heart made of light.. Conveying beautiful thought

A beautiful poem, a lovely rhyme scheme and the message is universal.