as I lie on this cliff
pondering all my thoughts
knowing that there is a God
knowing that there is sin
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despair strongwill and hope... all mixed well inside...good expressive write Blue...thanks 10
we all feel guilty when we make sins but we mustn't give up and don't repeat this fault.great writing! ! Merna
sin is an illusion to torment you into guilty pleasures of more sin for those that do not guilt trip themselves find no reason to sin, for you know there is a god then let her fill you with light until sin is something that cannot touch you..you are a powerful thinker never give up the fight to a thought of sin
Wow, a positife poem, , , I love this, never give up for what we fighting for, Don't die before we finished what we began in this world, Love it! I give you 10..! ! ! Naru Kaede, ,
good job...dude such a pretty poem with such a prtty words really i like it especially: I would rather keep fighting than give up on everything knowing giving up will just send me to hell nice man
Gave me goosebumps. So many ppl go through the same exact thing so do not feel alone cuz im right there with ya! Good job!