Nice
Samuel Chen58 minutes ago
But I feel that the rhymes, especially the initial ones, feel somewhat forced. I think the poem would be stronger without rhyme and a clearer message.
Comment +1
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Nice Samuel Chen58 minutes ago But I feel that the rhymes, especially the initial ones, feel somewhat forced. I think the poem would be stronger without rhyme and a clearer message. Comment +1