Wednesday, August 5, 2020

Keep Alive The Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Keep alive the fire till the oil is there
Law of diminishing utility is in place here

What goes up will come down someday
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M. Asim Nehal
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Shreya Hacks 01 September 2020

Excellent poem Before that dawn when the Sun rises with blazing fire And before that night when the Moon is not there

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M Asim Nehal 06 August 2020

Last two lines: Clarification Note Before that dawn when the Sun rises with blazing fire And before that night when the Moon is not there Here I mean to say from the absolute darkness, in other words from " no hope point/ hopeless situation" . And sun comes out with blazing fire.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 August 2020

Very inspirational words, but the last line I don't get that really I cite your line: And before that night when the Moon is not there..............according to me the moon is constantly peeping, Asim Sir! A poem that brilliantly reads, which I have enjoyed very much. Clearly conveyed until that last line. BTW greet your dear sister (USA) for me. Thank you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 August 2020

What a wonderful poem! A great thought from a brilliant mind embedded with insight and wisdom. Very inspiring. To my Poem List.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 August 2020

Hope! ! ! Bay of righteous steps; Inspiration! Uplifting righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Zuzu Mutairi 05 August 2020

Inspiring poem, I liked it.

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Sharad Bhatia 05 August 2020

बहुत - बहुत खूबसूरत जिंदगी का विवरण जिंदगी के दो पहलू और आपने दोनों पहलूओं को बखूबी से समझाया Rated 10+

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 August 2020

grow grow more grow with the rising sun be confident stay safe live healthy like the burning sun like the burning fire awake the inside but do not burn outside.......

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Rajnish Manga 05 August 2020

It talks of the maxim that everything is subject to change. Someone said- the only thing that doesn't change is the change itself. Thanks for this philosophical musing.

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Varsha M 05 August 2020

Yes this theory is always true. Keep alive fire. Very true.

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