Keats wanted the constancy of the bright star
only to see the heaving breast of his ladylove
only to hear the heartbeat of his sweet heart
Call it bathos?
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Doctor, this is sheer poetic majesty...Your imagework reaches beyond normal spectrum range...powerful delivery is achieved via your employment of captive, and impacting vernacular...Outstanding craftsmanship, rendered. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
So majestically you have deconstructed this sonnet of Keats [ Bright Star] which was written on a blank page in Shakespeare’s poems facing ’A Lover’s Complaint. Like Keats your poem also has three strands.. an evocation of cosmic, earth and wife.. beautifully conceived and offered ……