Friday, February 28, 2014

Kbhi Chuka Na Paoongi...[dedication To Maa] Comments

Rating: 4.4

tere anchal ko thaama to socha,,
isse choot na paoongi..
tu meri zindagi hai,, tujhse dur kasie jaoongi..
yeh zindagi nahi tera
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shraddha shraddha the poetess
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M. Asim Nehal 11 May 2023

There is no replacement of mother in this world.

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M. Asim Nehal 11 May 2023

Ek beti ka apne maa ke prati pyar aapne bahut achche tareeke se wyat kiya hai, Maa aur bachchon ka sambandh sab se bada aur atoot hota hai... Poore Sitare*****

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Soumita Sarkar 11 March 2022

Beautiful narration. My Mother at Sixty Six, poem by kamala Das also reverberates the same theme.

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Sekharan Pookkat 28 April 2019

Dedication to all mothers- a poets tribute with touching words- my 10++

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Rahul gupta 21 January 2019

Best poem in the history

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Ramesh Rai 04 September 2014

Maa is a natural word and equivalent to all creatures.

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Neela Nath Das 02 September 2014

You often write on your mom or mom of any one who appears before us as symbol of sacrifice and dedication.

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Shahzia Batool 15 April 2014

sad and beautifully written shraddha!

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Anoushka Sinha 25 March 2014

Really touching shraddha, as always wndrful! !

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Saavi Garg 10 March 2014

Such a beautiful poem..i wish i could write like that.

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Kanav Justa 04 March 2014

wow, , , , wonderful write, , , a wonderful flow of emotions in this poem, , , , ,

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Neeraj Hans 02 March 2014

great dear.. Mom is the only trace of God that we can see with our eyes... I think she's first and God is 2nd..

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Suman Kumar Das 02 March 2014

Superb! Dear.....................full of heartfelt words and emotion...............Keep it up.

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Tripsha Ghosh 02 March 2014

U made everyyone cry babes awesome

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Abhinit Chute (abz) 02 March 2014

Awesome...! Tear-Breaking! So Beautiful poem! And I look forward to turn to Hindi poetry! Invitation to read my poems..

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Neela Nath Das 01 March 2014

Kya baat kya baat! Kitni khush nasib he tumhari mom!

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Nikita Dutt 28 February 2014

koi nahi chuka pata hai yeh karz par har ma ko unke bachon ki hassi aur khushi bohot pyaari hoti hai, unke bache humesa khush rahe yehi sochti hain wo. bohot pyaar se likhi hai yeh shraddha aapne. May God bless you.keep writing and thankyou for sharing with us.

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Vivek Tiwari 28 February 2014

Hindi kavitaon me advitiy. Gm aur sakaratmak soch ki adbhut sammishran. Dil ko chhune vali marmsparshi kavita. I'll rate it 10

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Vivek Tiwari 28 February 2014

Hindi kavitaon me advitiy. Gm aur sakaratmak soch ki adbhut sammishran. Dil ko chhune vali marmsparshi kavita. I'll rate it 10

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Gajanan Mishra 28 February 2014

My Mother, my Goddess, living Goddess, for her I am here, my all in all, thanks. beautiful.

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