Kbhi Agar Aisa Ho To Kya Ho.. Comments

शानदार कविता! The end Strikes.

WOW... very beautiful composition

Meri hindi utni aachi nahi hai, aur devangari parni nahi aati mujhe, to sukhriya isse angreji akshoro mei likhne k liye. Aap ki kavita bohut khubsurat hai, aur iss mei bohut, bohut pyaar chupe hai. Isse humse batne k liye aapka bohut sukhriya Abhilasha ji: -)

Simple yet provoking, A sensible write :)

Hone ko toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai.. Aap bole is se pehle dil sun sakta hai. Ankhen bandh ho phir bhi ulajala dikh sakta hai Raah bhi manzil ban sakti hai Saathi manchaha mil sakta hai.... Hai na....Lovely poem...10+++++

aisa hua to pyaar ki ruswai hogi dil teri yaad me bahayega aansu humari dard humse rubaru hogi.... khamosh reh kr seh lenge teri ruswai laut aaye aap, bas yahi chahat hogi.....

Bhut sundar lines hai........ Deep feeling with lots of love :)

Throughout each line poem keeps one in a curious suspense. It's endings culminates in an amazing validation of a true love's commitment. Thank you for sharing Abhilasha. I like reading Hindi in Devanagari but so many people are writing like you that I too am learning to become comfortable with transliteration.

Hum rahe ya na rahe yaad aainge ye pal.......

The end was like............ AMAZING wisely summed up

What a beloved did was unjust, and the lover says he or she could also have returned the same but he or she can not as he or she is a true lover. A beautiful poem in a lovely style.

Aisa kabhi hota hai kya Ke unse hum pyaar na kare? Aisa kabhi hota hai kya Ke ekdin bhi unke yadon ke bina guzare? Aisa kabhi hota hai kya Ke jab hum unhe kare yaad Aur ansu o beech me thodi si hasi na dikhe? ? Har baar ki tarah dil ko chu lene wali kavita Abhilasha.. Bohut, bohut hi khoobsurat.. Sukhriya ise humare saath baat ne ke liye..

Kyun ye aksar hota hai YU aksar dilKyun ye akbar hota hai YU aksar dilse jab nikle dil tak na pahuche aisi bhavnaein aur jazbaat ho.. Par har kisi ko mukamal jahan nahi milta Kabhi zameen to kabhi aasma nahi milta.. It's a beautiful composition :) se jab nikle dil tak na pahuche aisi bhavnaein aur jazbaat ho.. Par har kisi ko mukamal jahan nahi milta Kabhi zameen to kabhi aasma nahi milta.. It's a beautiful composition :)

You go on searching and I may not available for you but your deep love may search me out. Very amazing, interesting and nice love poem shared really.10

Hum tumse waade karain Aur hum tumse fareb karain.....Really amazing but something gone amiss, it seems. Thank you.