Monday, August 4, 2008

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Timothy Weiermann
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Brittany graviet 06 October 2008

all of your poems seem to be very dark and forboding, but in a good way, not the depressing emo kind, the beautiful eye opening kind.

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Tyease Collins 11 August 2008

Another excellent dark poem. Just....awesome... absolutely nice such a few lines -Tess C.

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Dawn Slanker 07 August 2008

I really like your use of rhyme and word choice in this poem. Provocative theme...well written.

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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