Kavitha....Paron Ki Aahat! Comments

Geetha aap ki yeh kavita padh kar mujhe Sahib Bibi aur Ghulam ki Meena Kumari yad aa gayee, khas taur se us movie ka yeh gana Piya aiso jiya mein samaye gayo re, Ke main tanman ki sudh budh ganwae baithi, Har aahat pe samjhi woh aaye gayo re, Jhat phoolan ki sejiya pe jaey baithi. A beautiful poem.

beautiful feelings narrated so poetically in the most poetic language! ! !

aaaahhh... what a nice 1 Ma'm! ! !

Nice poem about shringar of women..(Mil gaye hont to har saans me sargosi hai, mere ijhaar se badakar meri khamoshi hai) read at my childhood don't remember the name of a poet well write Ma'am

Tanha tanha yeh zindagi guzaar di Unko ehsaas tak na hua Hum hain, jo unko hijr mein aaj bhi yaad karte hain Well...the above couplet I wrote on the spur of the moment after reading your poem. Geetha I didn't know that you that you had a flair for Urdu? A great effort ma'am: -) . Please don't give it up & thanks for the share.

Thank you for your comments on my poem..Come To Me (Like The Evening Breeze) is a song, if you want to listen it i am pleasure to share with you :) ...i dont know urdu but i still want to remark my presence here hahahaha_Soul

For years I've been away from Urdu as my scholastic concerns have been with English as a student and teacher but when I came across nice Urdu verse from my country and across the borders on PH, all my love for the language woke anew. I liked your nice and soft love song though some Hindi words I could not grasp fully, (I could get it's theme) .