Kavitha.....5.Pyaar Ki Aahaat! Comments

Lovely poem. Thought, it might be your first attempt at writing in Hindi, but is has all the perfection of a classical Romantic Poet. Thank you, Geetha ji. Please keep it up. Baarish ki woh pehli khushboo Jaise key koi pyaar ki kushboo Humse lipat rahi ho.

your pen has a great bonding with your thoughts...lagta nhi he keh yeh pehli baar likha he...itna mukammal he...well-done! ! !

Wonderful! ! mem It is touching the core of heart.Thanks.Thanks for Your comments.

bahut achhi lekhini hai. yedi samay mile to meri kuchh hindi kavitayen padh le jaise kavita meri preyasi nilam etc . regards

bohot sunder likha.god bless you.