Kavita 24 - Death, The Reality Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Kavita 24 - Death, The Reality

Rating: 5.0


Body said to the soul
There are many who adore my beauty
Ready to die for me, like moths in fire;
You are just an imagination
That nobody has yet set eyes on;
To all, you are just unknown.

Soul replied with a smile
The adorers of your beauty won't exist
Nor those who are ready to die for you
If I'd just wink my eyes.
Neither would your love
Nor your lovers survive for ever;
I solely, am your identity
Without me,
You are nothing but dirt.

This is a translation of the poem Death(A Real Fact) by KAVITA SINGH
Thursday, January 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: truth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Translation of the poem by Kavita Singh
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 25 January 2017

Thank you for translating this. It is a poem exceedingly well worth reading.

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 January 2017

Hi Susie, No doubt, this is a good poem, the original one by Kavita. But translation is very poor shade of it, I know. But I just wanted to introduce Ms Kavita Singh's poems to poets like you, who do not follow Hindi. That is why I took the risk. Very glad, you liked the poem. And the credit goes to Kavita.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2021

A beautiful poem. Liked the reply of the soul: 'The adorers of you beauty won't exist Nor those who are ready to die for you Neither would your love Nor your lovers survive for ever'. A wonderful poem....top score!

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Chinedu Dike 25 August 2019

Really a poignant rendition, well articulated and nicely written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Unnikrishnan.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 August 2019

Thank you, Dear Friend, for the profound analysis of the poem. Obliged

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Rebecca Navarre 18 July 2019

Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..................+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 July 2019

Thank you Becca. Your appreciation makes my day. Obliged.

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Rebecca Navarre 18 July 2019

The soul of the heart, soul of the mind, the soul of the beauty inside, the body without the soul to guide, is next to impossible to seek/find true light! .. Searching the heart of the soul, beautifully expressed! ..

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Nayanika Dey 10 July 2017

Without me, You are nothing but dirt. What a line! ! superb!

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 July 2017

Hi Nayanika, A very poignant and philosophical poem by talented poet Kavita Singh. I am obliged to you for reading this attempt of mine to render it in English..The good words are actually due to Kavita.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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