Kavita 20 - What Heart Desires Comments
You are so far away from me, yet so close
Quite emotional, but you speak no word
You retain a smile, despite an aching heart
Know not what my heart desires.
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A fine poem of love with lovely flow of words and rhyme..Congrats to Kavita Singh and Unnikrishnan E.S.
Hi Bharati, I believe you have read the original by Kavita too. Thank you.
i feel sad after reading it makes me think what my heart longing for..lol.It in world even a man got everything still not contented because we are born this way..
Thank you Ging for your time to read this poem and offer the comments. Obliged.
A poem of longing and loss! The heart yearns, but the reality stares. In this confusion, even the longing becomes blurred so that it is difficult to pin point what exactly the heart wishes to achieve! There is a tone of melancholy, but intense in its romantic appeal! A 10
Ma'm, Thank you for reading this beautiful poem by Kavita. She is a very talented poet. How far I have succeeded in capturing its beauty, I am not sure. Thank you very much for the comment of appreciation. I would communicate it to Kavita. And thank you for the perfect ten. Deeply Obliged. Your words of appreciation mean a lot to me. It is a pity, ph does not allow to award marks for the comments. This comment deserves a 100 without doubt.
A beautiful poem, an equally beautiful translation. A rhythmic flow of words, sounding like sweet music to ears. Loss of love is depicted with a flair for language n expression. A sure 10.
Thank you Nosheen. As you understand both Hindi and English, I value your words more than anything. Of course, the original poem of Kavita is quite beautiful and the angst of separation very skillfully expressed. She definitely deserves your appreciation. But I am not that confident of my write. But you make me proud, Nosheen.
My God! ! ! ! ! How Beautifully This Flows With Love, Heart and Woes. I Smile/I Cry, as if in a freezing night. I snuggle in a fog of memories. Know what not my heart desires. May Somehow, When, Your Dreams Take Flight, You Find A Dream, Ever So Beautiful, In The Night. And When You Wake With Mornings Light, Hope! ! ! ! ! You May Wish, To Hold It Tight! ! ! ! ! .. Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! So Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++++++
Thank you Rebecca, for reading this beautiful poem of Kavita. I have tried to render it in English. I am happy that you liked it. I would, sure, convey your appreciation to Kavita, She deserves all the good words. Thanks..
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Oh! Thank you for pointing out this extremely lovely poem for me to read! ! ! ! ! Oh my word! ! ! ! It is sparkling with a thousand beautiful phrases. Thank you, thank you, thank you! ! ! Under the cover of your memories Let me sleep on a bed of dreams- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - my heart melted Colorless are my days Without the hues of your love for me- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -I dissolved I do rise sometimes in the sky Just like the birds who fly- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - oh I soar I snuggle in the fog of my memories- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - if you hadn't posted this translation what a treasure I would have missed out on. You are a kind friend!
Hi Susie, I never knew your heart melts this easily... Thank you for reading this beautiful poem by Kavita. It is really a wonderful poem and she, very talented. I will convey your words of appreciation to her. And Susie, your write i relished very very much. They make me soar in the skies. Thank you, Thank YOU! !