Thursday, February 2, 2017

Kavita 19 - The Colours Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

The colours of life're so different
Somebody is happy with a little
Some are not content even in excess
Some resent their dear ones
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rini Shibu 30 May 2017

Beautiful poem on different people who are around us poor, rich, happy or those who are in grief..

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 May 2017

Hi Rini, Thank you for reading and posting your observations..Obliged...

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Susan Williams 05 April 2017

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this translation. You have no idea how many Poem Hunters are thankful you do this kind service. I would have missed the fragile beauty of these two lines- - - - - - All the desires of the heart Are broken to pieces like glass And I would have missed sharing and feeling this sentiment with our fellow traveler, Ms Kavita Singh- - - - - - I'm unable to fathom the intrigues of life There is a new story wherever you turn. You are such a good friend to PoemHubter and to me!

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 April 2017

Hi Susan, I love Kavita's poems and could easily relate to them, their emotive energy.. So, I find easy to translate them into English. However, my Hindi is very poor. So attempting a translation from English to hindi is not my cup of tea. Whenever I try, I take the help of Kavita. And how do I express my gratitude to you Susie? For all these good words, all the encouragement give to me and of course to Kavita. Deeply obliged. If PH allowed, I would have rated your remark by a 100++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 February 2017

A new story! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 February 2017

Sir, Thank you. I shall convey your appreciation to Ms Kavita.

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Nosheen Irfan 14 February 2017

Very wise write. Truly that's what life is. A beautiful summing up of life in a few lines. Kudos. A big 10.

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 February 2017

Hi Nosheen, Thank you very much for reading this poem by Kavita. And ever grateful to you for always reading my attempts on poetry.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 February 2017

Wow Really Powerfully And Creatively Put Poem! ! ! ! ! Excellently Written! ! ! ! ! Very Heart Felt! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++++++ Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 February 2017

Thank you Rebecca.. Obliged...

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 07 February 2017

Self revealing narration lingers to mind, thanks poet

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 February 2017

Thank you Saraswathy. Your words of appreciation are due to Kavita and I shall convey it to her.

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Sister Frances 03 February 2017

Beautifully translated and wonderfully written by Ms Singh. Cleverly written and the message is clear, in all facets of life we have those that are happy and content and those are not, yet that is life :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 February 2017

Hi Frances, Thank you for reading this exquisite poem by Kavita. Your comments are of immense value and encouragement to her.

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Jaya Das 03 February 2017

Beautiful translation portraying the truth of our life There is a new story wherever u turn 10+++

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 February 2017

Hi Jaya, Thank you very much for reading this poem. Your appreciation is actually due to Kavita, which I will convey to her. Thank you.

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Sometimes depression need to be diverted towards peace and happiness, Right, some sleep on money.

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 February 2017

Ram, Thank you very much. For reading this poem and posting such nice comments...

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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